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My White Paper Doll, by ~ResurrectedDaemon:iconResurrectedDaemon:

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My White Paper Doll (Goodbye My Childhood),

I kept dolls,
All the range,
I had them all,
More than most,

Soft and hard,
Fragile and durable,

My face a mask,
Did you see it?
Was I real?
Was I fake?

Soft and fragile,
Hard and durable,

So you said,
You said you could,
And I found you,
I found you couldn’t,

Destruction,
Be my sweet oblivion,

I tore you to shreds,
My white paper doll,
You were solid,
Violated and alone,

With you I bid,
Goodbye my childhood.
©2007-2010 ~ResurrectedDaemon
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Author's Comments

Just something I wrote, didn't take all that long, but they never do with me. Enjoy, and Matt, tell me what you think especially you >.>

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~Iasaki Sep 21, 2007, 5:37:23 AM
WOW it's NUTS It's PSYCHO It's WEIRD It's DEEEEEEEEP, It's well punctuated and no spelling errors to be noted.....It's INSANE It's COOKY, It's UNIQUE, It's ORIGINAL, It's FREAKIN ME OUT.....HOLY CRAP IT'S......*Dramatic pause* .......................YOU! :P :P :P :P :P :P :P :P
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~Harudagon Sep 24, 2007, 2:39:55 AM
my answer is yes, yes you were

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Peace is my profession......mass murder is just a hobby.....
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*Cold-Creature Sep 30, 2007, 6:33:56 AM
Whoosh *distracted* Uh... *pauses to re-read*... *re-reads again* Uh...
It's still midnight ain't it?
Overall, this is a nice poem. Love the ending. Nice and finite...

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"8 of the 10 people in my head are telling me not to kill you......."
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